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Thursday, 14 August 2014

Commonwealth Games Punctuation

fullstops, speech marks and capital letters in the right place

Unedited
go yelled dad he was yelling at the tv while watching the boxing during the commonwealth games dad was watching very intensely david nyika looked strong boom his opponent was knocked to the ground hooray we all shouted david won gold and he is a champion wow i thought i want to be a boxer when i grow up

Edited
‘’Go!’’ yelled dad, he was yelling at the T.V while watching the Boxing during the Commonwealth games. Dad was watching very, intensely David Nyika looked strong .Boom his opponent was knocked to the ground, ‘’hooray!’’ we all shouted. David won gold and he is a champion. Wow I thought I want to be a boxer when I grow up.

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