tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344766648197658068.post6305655026508224553..comments2017-11-15T12:51:06.865+13:00Comments on Revival : Writing a Narrative 2Pt England Blogs Administrator 2014Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07845137228130364482noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344766648197658068.post-47353636011344142962016-09-21T10:01:29.334+12:002016-09-21T10:01:29.334+12:00HI Revival I Really like you mystery story. it sou...HI Revival I Really like you mystery story. it sound like a giant tree or a giant person.But I really your story.<br />Good joB.<br />Love Bey_MelaiaMelaiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08422910851218408171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6344766648197658068.post-83959420100683152252016-03-07T14:07:09.835+13:002016-03-07T14:07:09.835+13:00I think you wrote this story really well, it was g...I think you wrote this story really well, it was good how you actually told us what The Legend was at the end because usually people forget to let the reader know what some things actually are, and that can ruin a good story. It was also good how you put 'It was dark and spooky' which gives the reader a good idea of what the scene looked like. Great work and keep it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com